NEW SYNOPSIS

Synopsis
Fascination

Three teenage girls walk through a forest to get home. Rizwana drops an object and hears a noise within the trees, and then mysteriously disappears. Megan and Georgie then realise she’s missing and tensions start to rise. We hear a noise/tree rustle; the two girls are spooked and begin to run.
To try to ‘play the game’ he kills some of his victims, who are young, teenage women, but abducts the rest for his own personal pleasure. Unexpectedly, the three girls are not dead and the help the rest of the hostages to escape

Proposed setting

‘The Plunge’ in Edenfield – forest and river
Time – dusk, enough light but still setting the mood

We then decided to change the storyline as we thought Rizwana disappearing mysteriously wasn’t plausible.  It didn’t make sense, and therefore didn’t reflect the mystery and suspense we wanted to create.  We then decided to change the storyline to two girls walking home through a forest.  The two girls notice a flashing light behind them and turn round to see what it is. The girls are spooked and quickly walk away from the light, which then gradually turns into a chase scene. Georgie separates from Megan and hides. In the meantime, Megan runs through the lake and hears Georgie shouting out to Megan and screaming in the background. Tension and suspense increases when Megan turns around and sees the spotlight behind her, and ends on a black screen.

To try to ‘play the game’, he kills some of his victims, who are young, teenage women, but abducts the rest for his own personal pleasure. Unexpectedly, the three girls are not dead and the help the rest of the hostages to escape.