Thursday, 23 February 2012

SCRIPT - FIRST DRAFT

Here is a copy of our initial plan for the script. We did not complete this, as we quickly decided that the logistics of this piece did not work. Also, the idea lacked realism.  We are now devising a new idea for our thriller.

OBSESSION

LES/PAN/TRACK shot.
EXT. FOREST – DUSK

GEORGIE, MEGAN, RIZWANA walk through forest, laughing, making mumbling sounds so that focus is on the setting.
MCU of Rizwana looking on her person for her phone, she looks around panicky, and begins to retrace her steps.
CU of phone on the floor, Rizwana approaches it; she goes to pick it up. LS/POV killer of Rizwana as she hears a noise. Hand held shot walks towards CU of Rizwana, cut to black, gasping noise.
CUT TO:

MCU GEORGIE MEGAN, still laughing.

GEORGIE

Rizwana you’re quiet?

MCU MEGAN turning round

MEGAN
Rizwana?

Georgie and Megan continue to look around.
POV from villain. Rustling of leaves etc.


END ON SCREAM - BLACK OUT

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